Worst Sentence YOU Wrote Today

  • November 24, 2014: 'Suddenly, something went straight through my chest.' 
  • November 25, 2014: 'I dropped his hand like it was a hot potato. Almost immediately I hated mysse because now he could be dead and I wouldn't even notice. Or appear to care.'
  • November 27, 2014: 'I just kind of KNEW it, like how you know the difference between a dog’s lick when he accidentally scraped his teeth on your nose and when he’s actually biting your nose.'
  • November 28, 2014: 'Most people try to be quiet when talking to themselves so that the sane people around won’t think they’re totally nuts and drag them off to some desolate island to die with all the other crazy people.'
  • December 5, 2014: 'I had to hunt again...to trap whatever animals were stupid enough to be out in the cold. So far, the only one I knew of was me.' Yeah I just wrote that...and that was really weird.

Please comment with your own worst NaNoWriMo sentences! If I can do it you can do it too!


  1. He couldn’t see her in the darkness, and she wasn’t responding, and of course the only way he could hear the whisper of her footsteps was to shut up and listen, so he did.



  2. "The werewolf was not changed so it was in human form."
    I wrote this one on my first NaNoWriMo. I am horribly ashamed of it now. XD

    1. This was my first year...and that is nothing compared to the awful things I have written. :)